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Thursday, 30 April 2020

My Writing Work From this Week

                                                    My Writing Work From this Week

Hi and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be talking to you about the writing work that i have done this week.  What we had to was start to plan Hollywood's next block buster film.  Here is my plan.




Please tell me if you any think that could add to my plan thank you for looking at my blog

1 comment:

  1. Mr Terry Mitchell6 May 2020 at 17:03

    Hi Hannah
    This is a great start to your writing, and you are well on the way to writing a really interesting narrative. I particularly like the complication twist in the plot when Emma is stopped by a herd of elephants. You might like to rewrite that part to being a "stampede of rampaging elephants" when you write your final copy.
    - Mr Mitchell

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