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For writing my class hotspot writing I have been writing a story, I am going to show it to you here.
Today was good day, the sun was shining the birds were whistling, and the leaf’s where bowling down the park. It is just going to great, but she was not having a good day ,the first bad thing that happened was she broke her favourite bowl and her cereal went every wear what she going to do next… she was making the bed when she riped her sheet she new it was just the start of a bad day when her mum told her to tack her dog a walk in the park… she took her dog for walk in the park when , Her dog’s lead Brock and dog ran away she went after her dog all the down the park, when her mum called her to say you to come home quick they is a big problem the shelf thal down and cat is underneath the shelf….The end
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