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Friday, 31 March 2017

My Tom True Heart Writing

Hi my name is Tom True heart, I am on a mission to save my 6 stunning brothers , and  princess brides.

 I will see if I can find them . I will go and look in the Village and I will take my very  spectacular sword  With me.  

I am in the village  “Maid” “yes Tom?”  “are my 6 stunning brothers in  here” no they are not in here” do you Know where they are” “no I do not” “OK then do you know where my princess brides are?” “no they went with your brothers” “Oh no what am I going to do?”. “I am only the size of a thumb I can not do this”. “You can do this Tom” “I am too small” “Come on Tom you can a lot of things with your super spectacular sword” “but it can’t make me super super big”. “OK then you are right’ “OK then I will go and look at some Other places then” “All right bye Tom come back for lunch Tom “OK I will come back”.

Where are you 6 stunning brothers and princess brides where are you come to the village  “come on where are you all? Come to the village” Wherever you are I am cold I am going back to the village”.It Is really cold out there I will stay in here for a little bit I think it is much better in here then out there it is very very frosty I will go back out there soon.’ Hi
Tom have you seen your
6 stunning brothers and princess brides” ‘no I have been looking for them all morning” OK Tom that Is very bad they are  going to be so upset where they are because tonight is the very fabulous ball would you like to come to the ball’ OK I will but will you come with me to find them’ all right Tom let’s go
can we get coats first’ that would be a good thing’.

It is so so so cold out there’. OK Tom where did you look’  little bit in  of the forest ‘all right let’s go into the forest “look” Tom over there is that them let’s go and had a look‘ I is them said Tom” ,I Am so out of the blue’s how are you all” .We all so so happy you found use, did you remember about the ball yes we did let’s go and have a lot of fun”.Come on let’s go to the village and get ready for the very  fabulous ball.”

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