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Friday, 30 June 2017

ALMA

   ALMA
One day it was snowing so much that everyone was inside. But not me, I was outside because I what to play outside. I was going to write my name on the board for Christmas. When I  had finished I turn’d around to look at the doll Store there was a doll that  like me. I was so amazed I tried to get in but could not open the door.

I kicked the door again and again but it did not open. The door opened.  I was amazed how many dolls were in there I started to get
a bit scared. I was trying to grab the doll but I step on something it was a toy that was riding a bike. So I standed up and the doll wasn’t there. I was saying in my head “where is the doll now I said” so I look up and tried to find the doll.

Then I look down and it wasn’t there I looked up again and the doll was on the shelf and I said “how did that doll go up to that shelf.” I saw the doll on the shelf, I was climbing up to get the doll off the shelf and I took my glove off with my teeth and I was going to get the doll off the shelf and that doll was alive so I said to myself “this is a haunted shop.”

That how I became a doll forever. Now I have heaps of doll friend now  I can talk to them now I love being a doll it amazing. The end

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