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Friday, 4 August 2017

bird



One day there was a birds called Hannah, Ethan ,Brent, Joy ,Tom ,Ben and Sam all the birds were fighting until a big blue bird came and, annoyed them. The little birds got very mad so the big bird was too heavy for the power line they could not stay on it. But they picked and picked and

Then the power line went down due to the big bird who was heavier than the little birds and they all went down and down each second. Then the birds had an idea. They wanted to peck the big birds toes to make him fall.
Before they did it though they had to ask the other ones, they all nodded their heads happily. Then they started to poke the big birds toes with they beek. One by One the toes started to let go of the power rope. Suddenly one of the brothers realised what was going to happen at  last it happened. His feet let go of the rope, the little birds flew in the sky like a rocket-ship. All their hair came off so they were boiled. They all hide behind the big blue bird.

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