Hi and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be talking to you about the work that I have done this week. I have started to write a story. Here it is.
Apart of the team
Lucy was in the school gym playing soccer, when a voice came on radio saying Lucy
please come to the principal's office. So Lucy left the gym and went to the principal's
office. The principal said come in I have good news for you, ok what is said Lucy on last
maths test you got the highest score out of every one so we are giving you a one and only
chance. To be a part of lighting which is a top secret spy squad. Who are trying to stop
thunder which are a group of spies who are trying to break the internet and so far it is
not going very well for them. They will give you a week to think about being a part of their
team but you can not tell anyone, ok I won't say Lucy. See you next week come to me if
you have any questions. Ok see you next week bye.
please come to the principal's office. So Lucy left the gym and went to the principal's
office. The principal said come in I have good news for you, ok what is said Lucy on last
maths test you got the highest score out of every one so we are giving you a one and only
chance. To be a part of lighting which is a top secret spy squad. Who are trying to stop
thunder which are a group of spies who are trying to break the internet and so far it is
not going very well for them. They will give you a week to think about being a part of their
team but you can not tell anyone, ok I won't say Lucy. See you next week come to me if
you have any questions. Ok see you next week bye.
Lucy spent all last night thinking about the big decision she had to make if she was to say
no her life would stay the same. But if she said yes her life could change forever it could
be good or bad. She couldn't even ask someone for their opinion because it was top
secret. She was in maths class which was her favourite class. But she wasn't even paying
no her life would stay the same. But if she said yes her life could change forever it could
be good or bad. She couldn't even ask someone for their opinion because it was top
secret. She was in maths class which was her favourite class. But she wasn't even paying
attention. Then she thought to herself if I was a spy I would have to pay attention all
the time then she started to listen to what the teacher was saying.
the time then she started to listen to what the teacher was saying.
The school bell rang and Lucy started to walk home when she was half way there she got
stooped by her maths teacher Mr M. Mr M asked Lucy why she was not paying attention
in class, Lucy said that she was really tired but Lucy wasn't tired at all, ok but will be
paying close attention you in class tomorrow said Mr M, ok see you tomorrow said Lucy
as she started to walk away. When Lucy got home her mum asked her how day was Lucy
said it was good said Lucy but it was to good it was terrible she even got caught for not
paying attention.
stooped by her maths teacher Mr M. Mr M asked Lucy why she was not paying attention
in class, Lucy said that she was really tired but Lucy wasn't tired at all, ok but will be
paying close attention you in class tomorrow said Mr M, ok see you tomorrow said Lucy
as she started to walk away. When Lucy got home her mum asked her how day was Lucy
said it was good said Lucy but it was to good it was terrible she even got caught for not
paying attention.
Hope you liked my story. Thank you for looking at my blog
Hi Hannah
ReplyDeleteI like your story a lot. Imagine if you really did become a spy. It would be really hard keeping it a secret from everyone, especially Mr M your Maths teacher!
I would like you to try using speech marks with you write about what people have said. For example:
The principal said "Come in I have good news for you".
"Ok what is it?" said Lucy.
- Mr Mitchell