Write that easy sentence #3
The ed sentence
Try starting your sentence with the ed from of the verb it makes for a punchy sentence start to a sentence.
Remember the rule when you have finished your ed phrase, place a comma then write the rest of the sentence.
some -ed words, surprised, excited , possessed , committed,
Examples - Determined to win tony pushed himself in the last metres of the sprint.
Concerned for the well being of the others ,the primer misters passed new laws.
Horror-fried by the gore ,i turned away form the scean.
My sentences: Delighted, by the lovely smell of cakes, I walked in to the room.
Committed to the class i did the work.
The "power" sentence.
If you waffle a lot in your writing try using a power sentence.
Being your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less. Get straight to get the point.
Examples - money is the root of all evil
What is right , isn't always popular.
My sentences. Don't judge a book by its cover. Treat overs how you want to treated.
Independent Task
Grasping, for breath after being chase down the road for 4 miles.
Deciding, to eat cake or to not eat cake.
Noticing the painting was missing from the wall.
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