My Theme Park
This my Theme park it is not finished get put it will be soon
If you have any ideas of the things , I can add please comment at the bottom of this post.
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I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 15 April 2020
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Hi Hannah,
ReplyDeleteGood work so far - I like the name "Sky High" and your menu looks really interesting, although you haven't put any prices yet (Mum might be able to help with setting the prices).
I thought of a better location for the theme park - what about in the Red Zone, as there is nothing there at the moment. You might also like to add a few more rides (and add the prices for each ride).
Your next step might be to add some pictures for your presentation.
I like the way you have posted your "work-in-progress" so you can get some feedback, rather than waiting until it is finished. I look forward to seeing the next version of your plans.