Beyond The Lines

            Beyond the lines

                                                          Beyond the Lines

In world war one there were two boys who were named Sam and Jonathan, Sam  is 5 and Jonathan is 9. Jonathan need’s to look after Sam. Jonathan said to Sam run Sam run get out of the way you are going to hit buy the bullet.

Come here now Sam you are not running when I tell you to come do it! Sam run came now Sam let’s go to the next place. Sam run get out of the way, Come on let’s go over there that will be a good thing to do. Get out the way Sam, let’s go Sam get ok’ came let's run over there to be safe ‘Jonathan look out!!

                                            THE END

My Cloud Writing

 The cloud

One day there was a cloud that was very big and fluffy with a big smile on his dial, he had a good personality, but he wasn't very nice cloud. The cloud got into a lot of mischief. He came out of the sky into the city. The cloud was making a lot  trouble. He was not  a very nice cloud at all.

One day he looked down into the city and thought let’s have some fun and make a fire, I will  make a fire but will everyone will get mad, it will be lot’s fun I think I’ll make the fire very BIG said the cloud.

The fire trucks arrived and tried to put it out. But they couldn’t. I am going to rain so my fire so it will go out  because I feel bad about what I did ,it was a massive mistake. Rain rain rain”thanks a lot cloud for helping said everyone your help was good very ‘thank you said the cloud’ .

I will not get into any more mischief are you really sure yes “I am really really really sure” we're not that sure said the fire brigade  will you believe in me please ‘ok then cloud If you do it again we will not believe  you ok deal. Let go and put the fire’s out over Christchurch cloud you can come and help use put the fire’s out, cloud ok I will.