Hotspot writing

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For writing my class  hotspot writing  I have been writing a story, I am going to show it to you here. 

Today was good day, the sun was shining the birds were whistling, and the leaf’s where bowling down the park. It is just going to great, but  she was not having a good day ,the first bad thing that happened was she broke her favourite bowl and her cereal went every wear what she going to do next… she was making the bed when she riped her sheet  she new it was just the start of a bad day when her mum told her to tack her dog a walk in the park… she took her dog for walk in the park when , Her dog’s lead Brock and dog ran away she went after her dog all the  down the park, when her mum called her to say you to come home quick they is a big problem the shelf thal down and cat is underneath the shelf….The end

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Multiple Perspectives

Welcome to my blog back for the last week we have multiple perspectives about the story of the the little pigs and the real story.  
A protagonist is the main character or the good guy the antagonist is the villain here an example . A protagonists is the main charterer in a story for example in The three little pigs the third little pig is the protagonist. An antagonist is the villain in the story. In The three little pigs story the wolf is the villain because he is trying to eat the third little pig. 

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School Holiday Fun

                                                             School  Holiday Fun!
                                                 

Welcome back to my blog, This term  we have been  working on writing about what we did in the school holidays to create a sense of place.  Here is my writing from this term.



In the fun school holidays. First week of the school holidays my mum had the week off  work so did a lot of fun things like Going to the gonadal with my dad we had lunch at the Golconda  before we had lunch we had a look at gift shop I got myself a H necklace it is made out of power shell then we went up the stairs  to the cafe to have lunch.


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